Sunday, March 6, 2011

Best Mermory From Cat Tien

My best memory from Cat Tien is when we went to Bau Sau. I WAS very excited about the crocodiles and wanted to see them  .However, it made me feel very disappointed because I couldn't see any crocodiles or animals when i got there. I walked through the forest for 10km. You know, 10km is not short at all. At first, from the beginning of the trip, we were very blissful and delighted. We walked and walked for 5km then we relaxed in a rest house. There, we played cards or ate snacks or did whatever we wanted. Some teachers and students came down to the lake to find the crocodiles. I had fallen down many times because of rocks on the way when I walked in the forest. But I was displeased at the tour guide. But NEVER-MIND. :)..This is the first time that I went to the forest so it was an unforgettable memory in my life.

2 comments:

  1. My paragraph is not good and sometimes it doesn’t make sense. And also my grammar is bad. So I will myself 9/12 :]

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  2. :)), your paragraph makes me feel like you are actually chatting with me. Yes, that does feel comfortable but you need a better word choice when you do writing. Use vocabularies! Other of that, I think your words are colorful and I can still get what you mean. 9-10/12 :) Keep up the good work :D

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